Pencil Portfolio For Fan Expo Toronto 2013

Here's a little 7 page story I whipped up to show some Penciling for review at Fan Expo. Overall I had a positive Review with Steve McNiven, 1 point he made was that it gets a little tonal and I need to dilettante Black and White a bit more to make it clear for the Inking process and I agree completely. I was kinda hoping for a more Harsh Critique and am wondering how diplomatic he was being.